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Hey bud. I'm sorry, but you really need some animation skills before you can expect to post something here. People here who don't submit their own shit will blam anything that doesn't meet their standards. You ever notice how people who make their own movies always write encouraging reviews? So yeah anyway my first suggestion is GET A PRELOADER. i really had trouble watching it all choppy and shit. and if at all possible try to minimize the amount of freehand drawing just because that seriously fucks up the animation. I don't know what else to say, but sorry, dude.